Me: I can just see it now... Bassy come back!! I didn't mean what I said! Bassy C- Sebastian: No..J....Just.... Just no.. Alright!? Me: You always ruin my fun... this is why Finny is mah boyfriend and not you!!! * Sticks out tongue like a child * So there Grell: What about me?!? Don't you love me too, Delilah!? Me: Yeah... But I see you more as a brother that I've never had.. Grell: * pouts * Then why were you reading this? Me: * stealthily deletes internet history * Read what? Grell: Th- Hey!!! it's not there anymore!!! I know you were reading it!!! Finny: * walks in * Read what? Grell: A fa-mmmhhhfffff Me: That'll be enough outta you young man!!! Grell: * licks hand * Me: EWWWWW!! EWWWW!!!! EW! EW!! GRELL YOU DISGUSTING SON OF A-- Grell: She was reading a fanfiction between Her and I... Finny: Oh.. Well you coulda just said so! Me: Ya mean ya don't mind? Finny: Nope! In fact you could just say that you want us both *smirks * Me: O.o.... * runs away to the roof * If anyone is reading this HALP MEH!!!!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *le me laughing* anyways.. *turns to Finny and Grell with mischievous smile* Sooooo, should I write a fanfic with both of you in it then? Grell: Oooooh! good idea! Finny: Yeah- wait. I don't have to be involved with HIM too do I?! (points horrified finger at Grell) Grell: Oh, what's so wrong with that? (devilish grin) Finny: eeeew! Get away! Me: *sigh* no Finny, just the reader. you and Grell will love the reader, not each other. Finny: *sigh of relief* Grell: Whatever~
Me: * le surprised * That was honestly not what I was implying but now that I think about it, I would really like that....... So if its not to any inconvenience to the you, plz do dat!! I would really appreciate it...
MrsSutcliff23Featured By OwnerMar 2, 2014Student Writer
I'm confused... story isn't even here, so how can someone possible like it? Please inform me. And all you other people, you need to calm down, life is not all about sex. It sure as neck is not about porn either.
Very true. Im glad more people undersrand my reason for changing this than I originally thought. Im leaving most of the storyline since it was really good, so all im doing is changing the sexual content to being more flirty instead. However, it will probably take me awhile due to school so everyone's gonna have to be patient. :\
I loved it when it was a lemon because its hard to find a grell lemon that is so masterly written as yours was, i was truly disappointed that i would not get to read it again , but since you wrote it so professionally i am truly looking forward to your rewrite. I usually am not so very impressed like I was when I read your story, and i encourage you to keep writing because many people will enjoy it, I guarantee
Sorry, I didn't want to edit it at first because I was afraid people would get upset, but I had to. I'm planning on making the updated versions kind of flirty, but clean. The rest of the story will remain unchanged, so I hope to make it just as good or even better this time. once again, I apologize, but I had to do it
Lol awesome! However, I am going to be rewriting this and the other story to be MUCH less sexual because its been eating at me and also I figured more people could read it that way. I'm going to replace it with mild flirtyness or fluff or something, so I hope I don't make anyone too upset