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I am currently changing these stories to be clean because they've been eating at me and making me feel wrong. 
Sorry if this upsets you,
                    ~Natalia
This is part 2 of the fanfic 'Masterful Maid' that was requested! Enjoy ;3

Sebastian: "You honestly wrote another one?"
Me: "Yes. Yes I did."
Sebastian: *Sighs* "Well I think I will go watch some kitten videos befor-"
Grell: OH BASSY!!!! Don't you think I'm absolutely sexy in this story?! ;D"
Sebastian: "No. I am leaving." *walks off*
Grell: "NO!!! BASSY! COME BACK!!!
Me: *thinking* Lol, Grell just came up with a new song title: 'Bassy Come Back' XD

Part 1: Masterful Maid
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Ocean-Flight Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ermehgurd.
So mad. xD
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PedoBearMustDie Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me: I can just see it now... Bassy come back!! I didn't mean what I said! Bassy C-
Sebastian: No..J....Just.... Just no.. Alright!?
Me: You always ruin my fun... this is why Finny is mah boyfriend and not you!!! * Sticks out tongue like a child * So there
Grell: What about me?!? Don't you love me too, Delilah!?
Me: Yeah... But I see you more as a brother that I've never had..
Grell: * pouts * Then why were you reading this?
Me: * stealthily deletes internet history * Read what?
Grell: Th- Hey!!! it's not there anymore!!! I know you were reading it!!!
Finny: * walks in * Read what?
Grell: A fa-mmmhhhfffff
Me: That'll be enough outta you young man!!!
Grell: * licks hand *
Me: EWWWWW!! EWWWW!!!! EW! EW!! GRELL YOU DISGUSTING SON OF A--
Grell: She was reading a fanfiction between Her and I...
Finny: Oh.. Well you coulda just said so!
Me: Ya mean ya don't mind?
Finny: Nope! In fact you could just say that you want us both *smirks *
Me: O.o.... * runs away to the roof * If anyone is reading this HALP MEH!!!!!!
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Student General Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *le me laughing* anyways.. *turns to Finny and Grell with mischievous smile* Sooooo, should I write a fanfic with both of you in it then? 
Grell: Oooooh! good idea!
Finny: Yeah- wait. I don't have to be involved with HIM too do I?! (points horrified finger at Grell)
Grell: Oh, what's so wrong with that? (devilish grin)
Finny: eeeew! Get away!
Me: *sigh* no Finny, just the reader. you and Grell will love the reader, not each other.
Finny: *sigh of relief*
Grell: Whatever~
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PedoBearMustDie Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me: * le surprised * That was honestly not what I was implying but now that I think about it, I would really like that....... So if its not to any inconvenience to the you, plz do dat!! I would really appreciate it...
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Student General Artist
Lol Ok!:D (Big Grin)  I may not have time to do one till spring break or so though :/ School just messes everything up! --: emote 
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kawaiibambino Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I know this has nothing to do with the story but,we have the same name,only mine is Natalija.

PS: Your story is very good~
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student General Artist
That's awesome! :) and thank you! :)
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ottolover101 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aww plz update these two stories soon! and when your done please tell me
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Okeedokee! I will! ^w^
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:iconottolover101:
ottolover101 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't wait!
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x-SweetPea-x Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
WHYYY ;____;
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MrsSutcliff23 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Writer
I'm confused... story isn't even here, so how can someone possible like it? Please inform me. And all you other people, you need to calm down, life is not all about sex. It sure as neck is not about porn either. Grell Sutcliff (Intro) [V2] Grell Sutcliff (Intro) [V2]  
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Very true. Im glad more people undersrand my reason for changing this than I originally thought. Im leaving most of the storyline since it was really good, so all im doing is changing the sexual content to being more flirty instead. However, it will probably take me awhile due to school so everyone's gonna have to be patient. :\
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Grace-Sutcliff Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
I loved it when it was a lemon because its hard to find a grell lemon that is so masterly written as yours was, i was truly disappointed that i would not get to read it again , but since you wrote it so professionally i am truly looking forward to your rewrite. I usually am not so very impressed like I was when I read your story, and i encourage you to keep writing because many people will enjoy it, I guarantee
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! to be honest, I wasn't sure if my stories would ever be very successful, but I'm honored to have impressed you! It's definitely a major encouragement for me, so thank you very much! :)
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Livvay Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
FUFUFUFU nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ;A; *ends up in a puddle of tears/nose blood from the 1st part*
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XxX-RANGIKU-XxX Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Aww I wanna see the original -3
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askserra Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
T^T
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JaadeWolf12 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
*screeches angrily* GOD FUCKING DAMMIT!!!!!
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Sorry, the story will still be the same, but it will be cleaner and kind of flirty rather than a lemon now. that's the only difference. Sorry if you liked it for the lemon, but I had to do it
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JaadeWolf12 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
It is a very good story. I liked it very much, and it just pisses me off that someone is trying to censor your writing.
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student General Artist
It's not really so much that someone was censoring it, its just I was raised to be against stuff like this, so it was eating at my conscious and I didn't want to risk other people I knew seeing it :/
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JaadeWolf12 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
Ah, I can relate. My family hates smutty stuff, well, everyone but me. Haha >ω<
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol yeah thank you for understanding!
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JaadeWolf12 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
Not a problem!
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
U now gets an awesome badge: *gives u awesome badge* lol
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fox1029 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
There goes the blushing.Now there is only one Grell X reader lemon I know!
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm sorry, I didn't want to disappoint anyone, but I also didn't want it to come back and slap me in the face later :/ 
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fox1029 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I was tired when I said this!I'm very sorry!Yours as just such good quality to my appreciation!Sorry!
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
It's alright. I understand :)
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SereenaBlood Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bloody hell!
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Sorry, I didn't want to edit it at first because I was afraid people would get upset, but I had to. I'm planning on making the updated versions kind of flirty, but clean. The rest of the story will remain unchanged, so I hope to make it just as good or even better this time. once again, I apologize, but I had to do it
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Miss-Fandom-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
QAQ No fair I just started reading this story
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm sorry, I'm updating both stories to be pretty much the same, just clean. I hope the clean ones will be just as good and plan to work as hard as can to make them as much or more. please be patient?
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Miss-Fandom-Chan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's okay, I will
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you :)
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Miss-Fandom-Chan Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome
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Konekokitty13 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
No.... TTTTTT^TTTTTT were is the original......
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:iconnataliaherdervary:
NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Im updating it to be cleaner. It will be exactly the same, just with slight flirting rather than a lemon. sorry :/
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Konekokitty13 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Y.Y
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LadyFaustus Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Is there any way to see the original, please? If not, then don't worry, I'm just curious is all. :)
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:iconnataliaherdervary:
NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student General Artist
No, I'm sorry, I've already started editing it and hope to finish it when I get the chance
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LadyFaustus Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Don't worry, I'll read it anyway! :D
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student General Artist
thanks :)
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LadyFaustus Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
You're welcome!
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serleena5 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Um, since you plan on redoing this, would you mind if I copy it onto my computer? (cuz I really like this version)
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student General Artist
That's perfectly fine, you have my permission
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serleena5 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oops, nevermind! I just saw your comment about it. ^^;
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One-life-to-end Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe... you have got to be kidding me! As soon as I read that the song came into my head " Bassy come back, you can blame it all on me.." eshesheshesheshee
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NataliaHerdervary Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol awesome! However, I am going to be rewriting this and the other story to be MUCH less sexual because its been eating at me and also I figured more people could read it that way. I'm going to replace it with mild flirtyness or fluff or something, so I hope I don't make anyone too upset :sorry: 
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